thick, velvety pillows
of dark
space
to push
thoughts away
soft
it tells you something
quiet
solitude
is so prized,
so sensuous
envelops in black
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thick, velvety pillows
of dark
space
to push
thoughts away
soft
it tells you something
quiet
solitude
is so prized,
so sensuous
envelops in black
thefeministwriterwhogoesmeh 
Thoughtfully penned…
Truly, solitude is prized and is the richness of the soul… The quieter we become, the more we can hear the voice of our inner self…
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Thank you!
Indeed, it is very necessary. I actually thought of this yesterday when I had a migraine and subsequent sensitivity to light and sound, which made it necessary for me to sit in very dark and quiet room. Then I pondered.
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Beautiful, well-composed, and meaningful! ❤ Moments of solitude are valuable for health and happiness. All the best! 🙂
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Thank you! Yes, solitude is a much needed ingredient of happiness and balance.
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Brilliant 👍
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Thanks!
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You’re most welcome 🖤
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Deep and wonderfully penned!
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure!
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This is so amazing, love the line breaks and the word choice! ❤
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ayy thank you! i like this new form of poetry, it’s easier to write and there is much to convey 😀
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Guten Tag
mein Schatten
nimmt mich mit
in das Dunkel
meiner aus
der Vergangenheit
ungezähmten
Gedanken
in meiner
Seele sind
alle Wege offen
die meine
Einsamkeit
meine Verlassenheit
umspannen
wie Schnee
und Eis
aus düsteren Wolken
das sanfte
Kissen den anderen
die nicht in ihre Tiefe schauen
die der Sinnlichkeit
der Götter in einem Menschen
ihrem Begeheren
darauf warten
Umschläge der Hoffnung
auf die niemand wartet
Herzliche Grüße
Hans Gamma
***
Good day
my shadow
takes me
in the dark
mine from
the past
untamed
thoughts
in my
Soul are
all roads open
mine
lonliness
my abandonment
span
like snow
and ice cream
from gloomy clouds
the gentle one
Pillow the other
who do not look into their depths
that of sensuality
of the gods in a man
their desire
waiting for it
Envelopes of hope
nobody is waiting for
Best regards
Hans Gamma
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wow. thanks for this eloquent little poem!
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Solitude is precious. Yes, who doesn’t need quality me-time. But solitude is precious only when you know that while you are alone, there is someone waiting out there for you to join them again. 😊
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Yes. You have put it beautifully; indeed, we mustn’t forget the world around us and become so immersed in ourselves that we forget that there are people who we mean a lot to.
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