drowning. drowning in a pool infested by thoughts. swishing, pulling, fish-like. colorful. blinding. stop. What am I? i am everything that i am made of. no, not just the body that ever-beating heart the never stopping mind. i am everything that i have experienced. i am everything that i own. i am my virtues, i am my weaknesses. this feeling of being me is both liberating and suffocating. i am floating i am falling i am confused.
perfect ❤️❤️
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Thanks Jim! This means a lot.
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This hits home. Fantastic work!
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Thanks!
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Excellent
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thank you!
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Beautiful emotional lines ! Thanks for sharing 😊👍
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Thanks for stopping by and reading my post!
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It’s my pleasure stay blessed ❣️💕
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You have captured so well what we all sometimes experience, days when nothing seemt to be coming together for us! ❤ ❤ ❤
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thanks Cheryl!
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Beautifully penned! The imperfected ambiguity of thoughts truly reflects the uniqueness of your poem… loved it! 🙂
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Thanks! It means a lot ~
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Nice one.
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Thanks!
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