
She was taking a stroll through the deep forest. With pinpricks of light coming through the sparse gaps in the dense canopy, it was a little easier for her to navigate. She felt drowsy. It had started to feel like she was drowning in the darkness, surrounded by countless shrubs and tall trees. It was becoming difficult for her to go on. She trudged on. Her burdens were weighing her down. She dropped to her knees and was about to completely collapse, when she saw something almost glisten behind a cluster of bushes.
She slowly crawled up to it, just to take a look at what it was. It was still hidden, so she weakly pushed through the foliage. It was a solitary rose.
The pure white of the matured and shapely petals shone, as a streak of light just happened to illumine it. It was perfect.
No rose could have flourished, if not for that bit of light that fell through the dense canopy. It was purely by chance that it happened to be just in the right place.
As she gazed intently at the rose, she started to see her own reflection in the petals. She looked at the rose in perplexity. Then, she slowly picked herself up. She remembered that she had ‘duties to fulfill’. She remembered that she had to let go of her burdens for some time. She remembered that she had to be the mirror that others could see their reflections in.
But it was difficult. It was always difficult.
In the green forest
There rose
A rose
It rose
White
In the light
That said
‘Rise’
And the rose thought
It might
And it
rose like a surp
rise
Dressed in white
disguise
Like the red-eyed little mice
That nibbled on the
ice
creamy insides of the cake
And then made a mistake
Because they all went off to sleep.
But they rose
Next dawn
When the early morning light
Poked their eyes with something
bright
And asked them to rise
And then
What a
surp
rise –
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Nice. Did you write it?
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Trickle wickle
Finicky fickle
Writing’s illusory!
Menotdunnit
Yenotdunnit
So I tellusorry.
Thisnomatter
Idlechatter
Mere illustory.
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Very beautifully written🏵️
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Thank you
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Just loved the expression ‘pin-pricks’ of light! I am learning from you Mugdha!
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Haha thanks! I really wish you still taught us though 😦
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This is a very nice read. And it’s wonderfully composed.
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Thank you!
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Thanks you so much! I’ll check it out!
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Sry grammatical error
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My pleasure. Will be waiting for your response
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Thank you so much! I’ll check it out!
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This is a quality piece of writing. Short yet poignant. To the point yet with deep meaning. Also true to life. Awesome work here.
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Thank you for the feedback!
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Your welcome! 😊
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Beautifully written. Keep up the good work. Keep writing.
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Thank you!
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Beautifully written! I really like the vocabulary you’ve used! 🙂
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Thanks!
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Beautiful post
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Thank you!
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Beautiful photo and nicely penned. You have a nice blog 🌺
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Thank you so much!
You do too :))
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It’s really nice of you to say that Jose :). Thanks! I promise I’ll try not to disappoint, hehe.
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